All Comments on 'The Ritzy Family Hotel Pt. 01'

Where is the mother in all of this!?

Wow so you had the main character turn into an asshole. Other than that a pretty good start to the story

A great start to what I hope will be many more chapters. 5*

You just can't do that. Creating a cliff in the middle of sex is plain cruel.

The story is hot though.

thank you.

very good build.

i think, if you just can manage time and fantasy to work with you, then you will create something amazing!!

VERY good start!!!

I like the premise, just hope the mother is a MILF to her son too.

Unique story, I like that. Super slow pace, I don't like that. I have enough interest to read another chapter but if the pace isn't considerably faster I'll be done. You also are making Erik into a predator though, which will ruin the story IMO.

Nice, hope he gets a shot at Audrey behind the reception desk...

Good story , good believable revealing pace. The story developed well, Instead of rushing the story

Hurry up with chapter 2!!

Great start. Can’t wait for the next chapter

One of the best writers here period

Great story. Has all of the ingredients to be outstanding.

Keep up the good work.

Great story line. Please continue it.

Wow it’s really been 9 months I need more already!

Chapter 2!!! Come on please. Talk about leaving us hanging.

Still checking often for part 2!

One of the best bro/sis stories I've read--on any site. I hope your respite from writing end soon and you can finish out this series. 5 of 5 stars