All Comments on 'The River'

Hello

I would have liked it if there had been slightly more of a build-up to this story, but that's a personal preference, rather than a criticism. I know other people prefer to get straight to the action.

But there were a lot of elements I thought were great. The jogger knowing exactly what was going on, but reacting like a normal person, rather than the kind of cliched character who takes one look and wants to get involved. I really appreciate a balance of realism in the midst of the horniness.

And I really loved the psychology of it. The fact that when his cock is in your mouth, you're ultimately in control, when it looks like a submissive position. That's a subtlety that a lot of people miss when they talk about cock-sucking.

I really hope you keep writing. I'm going to keep reading.

Graham

I agree with Graham. Young women don't seem to grasp the difference when I try to explain that to them. I am always the one in power when sucking a dick. Young men definitely appreciate the diference