by thornapple
Compelling reading, very believable, and very erotic.. Thanks!
Nice teasing story
I loved it all the way through.
So much more erotic than many of the wam bam stories around
I guess if everyone is O.K. with it things could work out but they very seldom do. Good writing and erotic, just not really my thing, been there done that and real life doesn't always work like this. Nice fantasy, thanks.
Very well written. Exciting, but not over-the-top. I enjoyed the emotional development. Maybe a sequal???
It looks like this fun couple is about to have some great experiences. Carry on.
Loved the story from the start to the end,would really like to read a sequel.
Excellent story line. Little confusing as to who spoke when but original and exciting. The email was an excellent set up for another story. DWornout must be too old to enjoy anything. LOL!
Seems they are drifting apart even more now. He cheated too. He's just a background figure but it would be nice to follow up with his account and if Jake's wife will remain in the dark about what happened before and still be OK if she finds out eventually. Don't believe this kind of arrangement is for everybody. Good writing.