All Comments on 'The Rock of Gibraltar'

by LunarSirius

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
the subtitle of this excellent story reads

"A father fills his daughter's void." And daddy sure does. He fills that cute little coochie between his baby girl's thighs with his fat veiny daddy-dick, the best filler for her sweet little slit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Beautiful

This story is beautiful. It's erotic and sexy and naughty, but it's also emotional. I loved it... This is my favorite story I've read in years and years on this site. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
eh

too emotional for my liking. also "magic wand" turned me off to the story.

LunarSiriusLunarSiriusalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Feedback

Thanks to anonymous for the negative feedback, particularly about the story being too emotional. Even though I can't please everyone, it is nice to know what went wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
awesome

Not to "emotional" it was a perfect balance. well done, thank you. more please !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

His wife knew he'd need their daughter, and she made sure his pain over her death would be eased. I think they'll get together as often as they can, whether they're "with" someone else or not. Personally, I wouldn't expect her first child to be anyone else's but her daddy's.

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