All Comments on 'The Rolls and the Pipe Ch. 04'

Wow - nine pages on Word 97 and I still didn't get onto a second .lit page!!!! Sheesh.

As of writing, two people (besides myself) have voted, and I'm holding strong at a 5.0! Thanks you two!

I'm working on Chapter 5 as I write, and will be incorportating more symbolism (I hope) into the story. My friends in the pipe-smoking world have been giving me rave reviews.

Thanks to Greg Pease for an awesome tobacco and a reason to write about it! Thanks for your patience as I struggle through my first story for Lit.com.

Enjoy!!!

Darrikk

The writing is fine, the spelling and grammar are good. However, I’m sorry to say I’m left somewhat cool by the experience. It just seems pretentious to be honest and I’m not really interested in the protagonists.