All Comments on 'The Room Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Like it started in the middle

How did he get in the room? If that is all he knows he is to in great show or good looking now. No sun, no way to work out. Maybe simple

Excercises. Living without sun and other human contact besides a sadist is Stockholm syndrome not something someone needs. How does he eat? The room has a small bathroom a bed his corner pillow and a chair and table. I could love this if i knew what was going on.

writeralewriteraleabout 6 years agoAuthor
Good point

There are 8 more chapters to the story so it will make more sense as you read on once they are published!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Please porst more! Gosh I really do think this captures what its like to be a slave!

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