by blacksheep20
That was a great start to the story. I hope that there will be more chapters to the story. Would like to see the characters develop a relationship in the future.
This is your only story? Dang, it's so good, I thought you were a prolific writer! Very well done. I would personally prefer a bit more 'dialog', getting to know you type stuff, and some more extensive character development, but this is great for a 'quickie'. Looking forward to more of your work!
Fricking HOT. Got me so wet. You have to do more. You write exactly what I like to hear.