All Comments on 'The Roommate Test Ch. 01'

by PetRopeBunny

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ontsurtontsurtabout 4 years ago

Love Love Love

Love the loving, gentle relationships between the two of them

Love the writing, the pacing, the general craftmanship

Love the fact that this is the first chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
so good

one of the best written stories on this site, love it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great Read

Really great story. You have got to keep this going please. Didn't notice any errors either. Nicely paced. My only complaint is that it ended. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Intriguing

Well written, gentle introduction of the two characters, already anxious to see what development you will slowly bring. You have touched something that makes waiting for chapter 2 an odd kind of frustration. Thank you.

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