All Comments on 'The Root and His Aunt Lynn'

Your writing is slick and smooth, and proceeds at pace, but the story needs... something more. A good story has a setup, transition, and a payoff. Your setup was, I'm sorry to say, boring.

Naughty aunt visits nephew and tells him she wants his huge cock - not a lot of thought went into that setup. There was no sexual tension, which is a fundamental requisite for a taboo story to be erotic. The crossing of boundaries and doing what they shouldn't is meant to be exciting, but here it was just perfunctory.

I write this not as a criticism, but hopefully as an aid with your future output. I really do like your writing style.

This series can not be complete without a Lute and Denise chapter......