All Comments on 'The Root and Nasty Rachel Pt. 01'

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ReedRichardsReedRichardsalmost 6 years ago
Biggest problem with the story?

It was set in the 70s, but Rachel still talked like a girl from today. High school girls from smaller towns spoke about rubbers, not condoms, and while many of them did lose their virginity in high school, they were a bit more circumspect in discussing openly whom they had fucked. They were still concerned about their reputations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

The build up is great tho! I was immediately looking for page 2 or chapter 2. Hoping author hurries up with the next installment.

roveroneroveroneabout 3 years ago

I like the set-up...also like the nasty Rachel

And being the 70's, no surprise she has a lovely bush-lucky Lute!

laughdruidlaughdruid5 months ago

I understand the 70's thing but always hated the bush and my girl friend was shaving since 1965.

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