All Comments on 'The Root Doctor'

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PostScriptorPostScriptorabout 12 years ago
Really very charming!

Enjoyed this one a lot. Well written, the pace was good, and it was a fun little story.

Alas, as one who posts stories in the non-erotic category, they don't get as much exposure as say, loving wives, where you get lots of exposure — if you like being beaten half to death by the readers. lol.

Thanks and Keep 'em up!

vintageridervintageriderabout 12 years ago
Really Good

You are an excellent author. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Sadly, Postscriptor is right

But it makes no sense to me. If you find a writer you like, you try different genre with them. I admit it, I am an LW addict and Gay does nothing for me (no problem with it, just not my thing). But if I find someone as good as qhml1, I will read most all of his stuff.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
THIS STORY IS WHAT I CALL "TRUE FICTION"

as for the theme of Root Dr. not all cultures understand or know about Voodoo or Black Magic, but its out there, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Tazz,have anyone ever tell you that you are an idiot?

What's worst, you showing it to the world.

The story? 3* .

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Enjoyed reading this

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Mildly interesting

You've never spent a lot of time in the Deep South, have you? Nah.

bruce22bruce22about 10 years ago
Amusing Fantasy

Full of images that hold you. I would have taken number three from the bad girl side before moving on to the loving girl!

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 9 years ago
I enjoyed the story as it was -

No changes needed or wanted -

Is it "true" - sure it is like all stories lol -

Could it be true - again yes - the cultures of this world are varied and beyond any one person to guarantee their reality or lack there of - do not prove your ignorance by denying some thing exists unless you can prove it doesn't - FYI proving a negative is supremely hard.

fanfarefanfarealmost 9 years ago
if you need any advice...

Lave kò toutouni ou

deyò pandan yon oraj

pandan y ap w ap li byen fò sa a

Geri nanm ou nan peche

ke ou ka jwenn wout ou

pwosperite ak renmen vre

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wow

The hair on my arms actually stood up on this one! Even though it's short, great story.

CrisInGACrisInGAover 6 years ago
Damn, I have no idea why I never read this before tonight

Something about the title maybe. I have done that before just passed on a story over and over then 2 years later I will give in and find a great story.

This is a great story, short, not too serious, just fun

tazz317tazz317over 6 years ago
WHO IS TO SAY IT IS NOT REAL

it all comes down to belief and relief. TK U MLJ LV NV

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Cute story but I only counted 3 marriages?

dgfergiedgfergieover 3 years ago

True story, really? I can believe it with all I've seen and heard about the south. Nice story

dgfergiedgfergieabout 2 years ago

I liked it before and like it now. Only took me two tries to find the right woman that lasted 40 years. The wrong woman lasted 13 before that and she sure tried to end my second marriage but didn't succeed thank goodness, sure tried though. Great story.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesabout 2 years ago

Sometimes you just need special help. Thanks for writing.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Wish I had some of that potion when I was 18. That or brains or something!

Loved it. On to da next.

Calico75Calico758 months ago

Good story. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

A rare Q tale that I hadn't read yet (most have worn out a couple of laptops)! Thanks Q - 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

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