All Comments on 'The Rope'

Great story!

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A little different but well done!

Good one! Soooo...what happens next, how does he get back up? More please!

This seems like a wonderful start to a coming of age story. I hope you plan to continue it so that we can find out whether he gets the girl or not perhaps many years down the road. Please keep going with this storyline.

There is always one or more in the crowd. We use to call them the bad dudes. The rest of us was called chicken!!! LOL Nice Read Thanks for sharing.

Loved it! As Rooster Cogburn said in True Grit, "Damn, he reminds me of - - - Me." Sounds like some of the adventures my buddies and I did walking on old railroad tracks when we were growing up. The part where the boys crossed the tracks over the bridge and kept listening for an oncoming train has to be experienced to know what it feels like. Well done. RT

Really wanted lit to get with Dan's sister. . Damit I want things to work out happy... not the way they do. Read all three of hicks place story's. You write the sceen very well and how the climaxes come dramatically. But in all the little details. The inherent inertia of people's actions. Reminding me after 60 years that simply being with the right one is better than sex with the not right one

A little late to the party, but glad I came! This is awesome writing and the story is captivating. So refreshing and thought-invoking. Love it!