by Alexandertg1955
I loved reading this again, Alexander. Why didn't you tell me it had been published? Naughty man, you deserve a spanking...*laughing* I hope you will not be so modest next time you're published. Thanks for immortalizing your tale, I will be sure to tell others it is here!! xo & @->->-
Way too many silly little typos--misspellings, mostly or incorrect word usage. You can do better in that category. The story took quite a while to get to the sex, then almost nothing to get through it. Work on the balance.