All Comments on 'The Ruby Heart Ch. 02'

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curiousk75curiousk75over 14 years ago
Damn!

I gotta find me one of them Hunter boys!

CaseyLynn326CaseyLynn326over 14 years ago
I agree...

I need to find one of those Hunter boys too!!!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Good chapter but

I was very turned off when Quinn said Elianna was like a copy of Angel. She's not just a replica. It sounded like he was settling for second best and that he was only attracted to her because she looked like his cousin's wife. I was worried he was going to call out Angel. To me, sleeping with someone because they remind you of someone else is completely repulsive. I hope I misinterpreted that. If not... what a jerk.

This chapter was well written as always and I would have enjoyed it more without that little paragraph.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great start

Wow, all in this only two chapters. Loving it. I like Quinn falling in love with Elianna, and the scene was great and very sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i wont begrudge your family their time

but only because their blood. Otherwise i need to know how things work out, and dont work out before they work out!

magicsspottedstablesmagicsspottedstablesover 14 years ago
MORE please

Please, please, please continue this story!!!

candi_kanecandi_kaneover 14 years ago
Hot Damn

Quinn is so freakin sexy! My honey better watch out when he gets home..its on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please oh please

Youve seriously have to work on updating this story .. Its been forever :( and Quinn is so damn yummy I think I might just try to find a real life version lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
HOT

Absolutely, stupefyingly Hot!!!

Love the story!

MissWizz

cpm09cpm09about 14 years ago
Great!

But, where is the rest? I am hooked on this Hunter family! Love it!

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Hey: I'm sorry about chapter two of Captive Angel being posted before chapter one. There was a paragraph or two that needed editing and I turned it back in to those who run this place. It should be out soon. Also. If there are any of my books you would like reported just tell...

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