The Ruby Heart Ch. 02

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"No," she moaned then felt the heat of him inside of her. She cried out with him, her legs moving against the bed. She felt as if she were dying and she reached for him with one hand, feeling his fingers twine around hers even as he collapsed against her. Kissing the soft spot just under her ear, he moved to the side, letting her curl up against him.

"Sleep, Elianna."

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cpm09cpm09about 14 years ago
Great!

But, where is the rest? I am hooked on this Hunter family! Love it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
HOT

Absolutely, stupefyingly Hot!!!

Love the story!

MissWizz

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Please oh please

Youve seriously have to work on updating this story .. Its been forever :( and Quinn is so damn yummy I think I might just try to find a real life version lol

candi_kanecandi_kaneover 14 years ago
Hot Damn

Quinn is so freakin sexy! My honey better watch out when he gets home..its on!

magicsspottedstablesmagicsspottedstablesover 14 years ago
MORE please

Please, please, please continue this story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i wont begrudge your family their time

but only because their blood. Otherwise i need to know how things work out, and dont work out before they work out!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great start

Wow, all in this only two chapters. Loving it. I like Quinn falling in love with Elianna, and the scene was great and very sweet.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 14 years ago
Good chapter but

I was very turned off when Quinn said Elianna was like a copy of Angel. She's not just a replica. It sounded like he was settling for second best and that he was only attracted to her because she looked like his cousin's wife. I was worried he was going to call out Angel. To me, sleeping with someone because they remind you of someone else is completely repulsive. I hope I misinterpreted that. If not... what a jerk.

This chapter was well written as always and I would have enjoyed it more without that little paragraph.

CaseyLynn326CaseyLynn326over 14 years ago
I agree...

I need to find one of those Hunter boys too!!!

curiousk75curiousk75over 14 years ago
Damn!

I gotta find me one of them Hunter boys!

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