All Comments on 'The Runesmith Chronicles Ch. 01'

A genuinely interesting start to a series with a great perspective on the 'monster girl' tagline. I've been hankering for another series of this style since "Blazing Glory" wrapped up and "The Missing Dragon" is winding up to 'season two'.

A promising start, I'll be keeping my eye on this.

Best of luck, Nicholas.

Pleasant story, light tone though that could easily turn dark (though I would appreciate a more fantastic world where that isn't necessary) but its your world. I look forward to more, and more so to better understanding what a Runesmith is to you.

Hope this reaches you Nicholas.

If you haven't already check out writerannabelle and her Home or Horny Monsters series. If you enjoy my stories you may enjoy hers as well.

Second chapter is in moderation, chapter three ended up being a story chapter w/o sexy times so I'm going to post it at the same time as chapter four.

Having no idea what MGQ & MGE are, saves from reading the story.

Very rarely do you get the gentle fem dom with a giant girl for straight guys. When I got to the end of chapter 4 I actually cheered

Was afraid at beginning it would all be sex!

We have:

a plot

A mystery

Character extension

Huh, weird, but interesting so far.

You would be well served to have someone better versed in grammar look over your efforts. You tell a good tale. It therefore deserves proper punctuation, spelling, sentence structure, etc.

Just started the series. Looks very interesting as a premise. Monster women looking for human "energy or spirit". Time for chapter two.

Good Start. Enough to wet the appetite and move onto the next chapter.

excellent start. A bit confused why she called her past lovers captives and why they were afraid if she is all about consent.

Just finished reading the series and I miss Ikuna so much I re read the first chapter again. I can’t believe I’ve been a fan for 5 years, and that you’ve been writing this for 6 🤯. To say I appreciate you isn’t enough. Thank you so very much for being a writer.

Good hook. I have stumbled onto a new series to read.