All Comments on 'The Sales Lady Ch. 01'

Ignore previous comment he obviously didn't pay attention. 50+ is mature. Hope 2nd part has her making delivery in person. Enjoyed. 5Stars.

Interesting start not like any perfume sale lady I have ever met!! Looking forward to Ch.02. Thanks for sharing.

Great story can't wait until you do chapter 4. Very exciting and a great read.

Oh my...........

I just found out about you and I’m hooked!! What a great start to this series and goody,I’m off to read the next chapters as soon as I finish this comment lol.

Nothing gets me more excited than reading a good mature story where 50 and above is the “perfect age” for the woman soooo thank you for mentioning that little part and I really can’t wait to finish the rest of this series now ;)

A fan....

Nice little story, just very difficult to read due to errors and lack of punctuation. How did you get this accepted by the Lit quotation police?

The story is nice but it super hard to read.

1. You're story is missing personal speech, which makes it hard to follow.

2. No punctuation.

Tough to read with bouncing back and forth between first and second person. Is he telling the story himself? The lack of punctuation, specifically quotation marks, also makes it difficult to follow.

Having said all that, I like the premise and will certainly keep reading.

Clever scenario and worth the read. Keep it up, per se.

Fabulous

Also liking premise-hardcore saleswoman-ANYTHING to make a sale-!...

and caught a glimpse of Ch 14, so know she starts playing for both teams.

And following all H I think...going to enjoy.

Love the sexy scenario, looking forward to reading the othe chapters now... a book not to put down. G