All Comments on 'The Samurai's Dream'

A wonderful blend of skilled storytelling, delightful imagery and powerful eroticism. A real pleasure to experience. Keep writing - they get better every time!

Great writing! Whether you invented the scenes entirely or borrowed parts of them, your achieved a great short story with the range of emotions from loneliness to happiness to a peaceful, poignient ending.

I like how you incorporated Japanese elements without over exaggeration. The story has an acurate and smooth use of the theme "natsukaishi" or bittersweet nostalgia. To be honest, as a Japanese speaker, I hesitated at at the title including The title. I was pleasantly surprised that your story One of universal love and characters, full of care. One of universal love and characters and full of care.

Thanks for sharing and keep it up!

GB