by RiverMaya
I am deeply humbled. Thank you so much.
A mystery thriller with a dark background story - almost painful at several times what happens to the characters, took several breaks to read through.
With unfolding of the story, some directions and clues given, it became more and more captivating.
Loved that with each new puzzle piece the mystery became even more blurred than clearer.
And, well, when will those villain ever learn to be not so talkative?
Last but not least, thanks for the loveliest moment in your story when Maria is told that one day she will be happy to be born a girl. I would love to see the day when it won't make a difference in what body you are born and what you later decide how you define yourself.
Thanks for your story, looking forward to read the next.
A treasured complement ♡ Thank you once again, snow.
I didn’t know what to expect, but was very impressed at your plot and the ending. I know firsthand that writing a story like this was not easy to write, it was a real labor of love. Well Done!
Thank you. Your kind and generous comment has made my day!
Worthy of a muse
You write with a rare combination of power and tenderness. I'm not sure we deserve you.
Thank you for the kind and generous comments, I shall treasure them.
I just saw you posted chapter 3 of this series and realized I have never read it. And now I am so glad I did. Every turn led me farther from the culprit. I loved every piece of this and every time I thought I knew who had done what, you proved me wrong. Wonderful craftsmanship, River. 5 Stars. LOVED IT! and moving on to Ch2!
Reply to HaydenDLinder
Thank you, thank you and thank you! Treasured compliment coming from you. :)