All Comments on 'The Sasha Show'

This is one of the best story ive read in literotica. Just reminded me of someone. Great work!

I don't know if u r a technical writer in real life - but you definately have a talent for writing - this is one of the hottest stories I have ever read - a writers talent is making you feel like u are "right there" - u certainly did that - impressive, Great Job

Fantastic from beginning to end. I feel this could continue, the husband is home and is forced to witness them together and they tease the husband, or you could included friends and work colleagues into the mix...

Above the level of most stories posted on here. I would be surprised if you weren't already a published writer. If you're not, it's something to consider.

Disfrute mucho esta lectura. Buena secuencia, buen lenguaje, muy original y caliente. Felicitaciones. Puede ud

Definitely ranks high on the smut meter!

One of the hottest stories that I have read in years.

Well done.

How did this story get so highly rated? The narrator is a voyeuristic jagoff for whom the last few pages must have been a fever dream.

The characters are wooden and the culmination of a 15 year old’s jerk off dreams - Oh! wait! That’s the key to the higher ratings: the jerky-jerky boys with a video game controller in one hand and their feeble dicks in the other must have loved this shit.

Thank god I can speed read. I’d be angry if I’d spent quality time on this teen jerkoff material.