All Comments on 'The Saturday Night Club'

Very good. I’m not a fan of big dick stories, because it’s usually all they are about, but you’ve made it just a part of him, that explains how he got to be there.

I have a request: part 2 is about his aunt, could there be a part 3 where he has his sister’s ass?

Please do another chapter

Fantastic story!! Can't wait for chapter 2!

You have a talent. You transport your readers to the scene in such a way that they feel they are there with you and participating. You inject subtle wit into the narrative, nothing forced or obvious. The story has great pace, not rushed but also definitely not slow. I look forward to more from you.

The story like most of your work is excellent, but it is somehow incomplete. It left me hanging wanting resolution

Now you need to tell us about fucking his aunt. Maybe his sister too. I really like to read bout him telling his mother and having a full family fuck fest so both parents have their fantasies fulfilled.

Nice beginning, now get writing chapter two. Just the sort of job a young, well-hung stud should have, also the sort of club every town needs.

Loved it thank you for writing

him fucking his aunt and her discovering who he was

This story needs a few more chapters.Very good job,waiting for the next chapter.

Can’t wait for more.

if mommy only knew. her son was a card carrying WHORE! LOL!!!

Great start

Molto eccitante! Continua così.

His mother couldn't recognise his voice?

Fantastic story, I loved it. Please continue this one. There are lots of directions this can go.

Please continue, he needs to fuck her brains out many more times. I need to know about his aunt and his big cock.

Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter! Five stars and a favorite point!

I do hope you’re planning a chapter 2. Thanks for the post.

Is worthy of a few more chapters, starting with the size queen sister.

This is the start of a great story with a lot of options to work with, so I hope you make it into a series, keep up the good work.

There is something missing in your story. It jumps around a bit skittishly and is all but too brief on detail.

Has the makings for a story one could really get involved in, and the imagination could run rampant.

Room for improvement. Thank you.

Gave you 5 stars hoping that you fuck your sister in the next chapter and you find out your mother knew it was you all along.

keep going hopefully mom and aunt will find out who he is and use him a lot more

Good story, but need to have more family members involved, with possibilities of threesomes with mother, daughter and the stallion. And more aunts or cousins involved. Great possibilities. Keep writing on this subject.

You have to definitely continue this one, so many directions it could go. His aunt and sister but I want to see what happens when they find out it's him. Such a good story.

please continue aunty next then sis?

Please, more.

aunt and mom togther--3-some??

good story, but no finish, more like a teaser for future chapters, well written, well paced.

I'm all in favor of continuing the series, especially if the action extends off duty to the family home, but I'm afraid the parts with Ryan personally make no sense to me. The job should be a secret that he keeps to himself unless his parents or other family members figure it out.

After all, what guarantee does he have that Ryan won't accidentally spill the beans at some point?

Otherwise, keep up the good work.

I love the ways he’s getting his mom!!

I wish my mom was like that I love your story

Great story and I only wish that I was the one servicing mother

A most unusual, yet great story. Also, it's well told. Great job!

Great story,, yet it leaves me wondering as to how his mother doesn’t know his voice or is it that she does but still wants it

Great story! I hope the rest are as good or even better!

Great story I enjoyed it very much. I'll check what else you have published!

Cheers

SAGE