by rowingbigboy
Outrageously hot! And right under their unsuspecting girlfriends’ noses too… which makes it even hotter!
I want a second chapter where we see how horny Jan is for the MC. Maybe a bit more emotional given that Jan ended up crying and all (even tho he was an asshole most of the chapter)
Absolutely FANTASTIC!! Your writing style and use of expression and vocabulary is excellent! I didn't want the story to end, but I had to keep reading!!