All Comments on 'The Savannah Situation Pt. 01'

A little long for a buildup. However, wanting more.

My money is on Savannah; he has tasted the wine and now he has to quench his thirst. He'll be back.......

This is one of the best submissions I've seen on this site. I love the long build-up, not just jumping straight to the sex. I am very anxious to see the next chapter. I will be checking every day for it.

Thanks for this.

Excellent depiction of the fatherly turmoil. Can't wait to see where this goes...

Can't wait for more. A long build up, but the climax looks like it'll be worth it!

Please let if follow up... with a nice ending and a little more detail.

Email me the link please.

flirtfull.guy@gmail.com

That's all I can say! Great writing, and I can't wait for more!

This is one of the best stories I've read in a long time, not only is not chock full of guys with 10-12" cocks and women with 42DD breasts, my pet peeves, it handles the situation realistically! Consensual incest is not usually a thing people just jump into, as I know from personal experience. It really struck a chord with me as I identify with Savannah. I hope that there is more coming soon, there are few stories here that have captivated me as much as this one has! Bravo! (Those who liked this type of story should look up the "Table for Two" series by Jessica S on Literotica!)

This is one of the very best stories I’ve ever read on literotica or any other amateur/fan fiction site. Insightful, developed, well-written, complex, sensitive, deeply loving and even realistic (such a rarity in the incest/taboo genre)! This story is remarkable and I can’t waut to read more!!

Shades of Nomennescio.

I've read this many times, never commented on part one though.

I have many favorite parts of this story, this is just one, when Savannah knows that this will happen, that stands out:

""There's no way I'm gonna do this with you when you refuse to see a doctor about something this fucked up.""

You know how to write, that is SO obvious...but could you drag this story any freaking longer??!! My God!! TOO MUCH BUILD UP!!

I really liked this story. I loved the soul searching from the father and the intelligent characterisation of the daughter. If I were to really nit-pick the build up may be a little overdone for this chapter, but it hasn't distracted from the fact that you sir can write! 5 stars from me. Looking forward to reading the next instalment

I really like the character development in this story so far, I like hearing the inner dialogue which shows the dad getting nervous and shy, 5 stars

Re-reading again. I'm still so in love with this story!

Need to finish it all the way not half cocked. Was a good story till the no finish. SAD

Have I told you before how much I love this story...it's been too long since I reread it.