All Comments on 'The Scent of a Woman'

To fast, do they really work like that or was this just titillation???????

Badly written and edited. How someone could submit this as a work ready to be read is beyond me!

Desperately hoping for more!! :)

I didn't score this as I felt like it was written by someone who's language is not primarily English, and deserved to be judged if and when it's polished a little more. It was rushed and lacked any editing. Layla going from a straight college girl to a submissive lesbian slut in a few sentences. The idea is good but it needs to be expanded to make it anywhere near credible, too many mistakes and way too brief.

Please write more and take it slow, imagine yourself in the same position and write how you think you'd feel.

As I said: I didn't score this because I believe it can be so much better and would deserve a good rating. We learn from our mistakes, so please continue :))

but I could not get into this, it went to fast for me there was no kind of build up for this

Sexy but way too absurd haha