All Comments on 'The Scent of Her'

5 stars

Bittersweet ending. This story posted the day after Thanksgiving in the US, one of the saddest holidays ever. All these sad lonely horny people will either love it or hate as they project themselves into the characters.

That was an atmospheric sweet little piece. I quite enjoyed it and liked that it was of the sad sort.

You have some mild issues with tense that you might need to watch out for next time writing. But oh well, isn't that the case for all of us.

Excellent. This is poignant and real, but sexy too, and worthy of five stars.

Sadness, loneliness, despair, hope, disappointment. His life, my life, your life... Most of us have been there! A nice little read, and a reminder that life can be hard. If you find something nice along the way, keep it!! Those good things are too often difficult to replace.

Even better the second time.

Very nice, so well crafted — drawn into the erotic moment between two real characters. Poignantly tender and, yes, probably sad but not entirely without hope. Probably feel different the second time read and upon the third, yet a different feeling.

A tender, touching tale, reminding the reader of love lost but never forgotten. Really well written, it leaves us with a sense of sorrow but also a touch of hope for the future and the chance of better days ahead. Well done.

love lost

A masterpiece, heart touching, even the title was perfect.

Interesting lost love story.

But I wonder why she would "make love" to the guy who dumped her years earlier, then disappear without a word. Was her controlling the situation and now dumping him retaliation?