All Comments on 'The School'

More, more, more!

Wonderful buildup, wonderful scene setting. I agree with the comment above: More! And, before I forget, thanks for this chapter!

wonderfull start. hope there is going to be more

thanks

Really engaging premise. Keep going, please!

beautiful ending

Please, please write another chapter (or 2 or 3.......)

I have seen similarities (regretfully) to my self-employed life. I have to know what happens!

Great writing, I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this series. Hurry up and write!

I loved it! Yes, it was somewhat predictable but so are most of us. Nicely written and the flow was paced perfectly for me.

Thank you.

Now, where is the follow up?

There were a few words that, while being spelled correctly, were not the right word. I believe that you used spacial when it was pretty obvious that you meant special. Great story, though.