by bluefox07
This story had something I haven't seen in sex stories for ages and that was walking exactly in the plot line plus describing sex scenes effectively besides you really made the story humorous and exciting. Congrats on you work.
To quote:
' Doug looked thoughtfully into space for a moment, and then said, "There's a certain irony here, Dave."
"Yes there is." '
Lol! Had to laugh! That was just perfect phrasing.
of lust and young bucks testing the waters. Enjoyable read.
And why only three comments - I can not imagine. You read a very intelligent, credible and erotic narrative and pause every now and than to appreciate how rare this kind of stories are on this site...sigh.
I have read a few of your stories and you have a real talent. I like all the details leading up to the "event". The fetish with younger guys and big breasted woman suit me just fine! Keep up the good work and the good stories....how about a story about a man in his 30's and lady in her 50'S!
To the author of the previous post, you've left this same comment on several of my stories, and while I value all critiques I have no desire to copycat stories like "Naughty High Class Mom," as good as that story may be. But thanks for taking time to read the work. Cheers! -M
The story wasn't bad but lacked the "HEAT" like the stories "Naughty High Class Mom" part 1&2