All Comments on 'The Search For The Perfect Lube'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 1 year ago

Different but funny!

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naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uabout 1 year ago

And now we know the rest of the story :)

A_BierceA_Bierceabout 1 year ago

Another flawless, brilliant story, Ronde, wherein Kimberly offered to take the team for one but fairest Helen launched the slippery substances and raised Tim's tower topless.

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(Mea maxima culpa)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A good chuckle. Well worth the read. 5*

dgfergiedgfergieabout 1 year ago

It's good to know there are so many team players out there........................5 stars

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClass9 months ago

Can't imagine what FPP's next product will be, but I'm sure Tim will be n the middle of it. If Tim ever quits, I'd be available to take his place. Enjoyable story.

LeFrog08LeFrog087 months ago

worth a chuckle, thanks for the jauges.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I guess management can get in on the fun. Fun story. 5*

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Really different and clever. Parts of it were hilarious. Well done!

Richard1940Richard19402 months ago

Absolutely hilarious. I was smiling most of the way and laughing out loud for the last page or so. Keep up the good work.Thank you.

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