All Comments on 'The Second Chance Ch. 13-14'

Great end thanks

A FANTASTIC ending to a fantastic story. Very well done and superbly put together. So glad that you gave us a read that many of us will suggest to others.

I enjoyed this. It was full of emotion and suspense. The sex, not being the focus, didn't disappoint but was well-written and very erotic. I thought the ending brought it to a satisfactory conclusion. 😉

A fantastic ending!

i enjoyed your story very much. it had a little bit of everything in it and that made it a believable , stranger things have happened story. also liked that it had a good ending , this section needs more like yours and a whole lots less of those fucking sick twisted cuck bullshit sissy stories

It goes from chapter 11 to chapter's 13-14. Where is chapter 12?

Eleven installments in this story. All of them in novels/novellas except for this one. Why not this one too?

This is kind of like giving an employee a machine part at the end of the day and telling them to put it together. But they have never seen the project before and they see the part they are holding is number 11 of 11 parts, but that's all they have. Now they are expected to go looking for the other 10 parts to finish the machine.

I'm not going to put it together.

Good story about a good loving wife. I’m going to try to read the entire novella.

I want to thank the commenters for their candid responses. For the anonymous commenter who wants to know why I put this conclusion

into the loving wives category, it was so that I could attract more readers. I saw that there is a general reluctance to commit to reading a novella.

Excellent ending for the gorgeous Anne. Here she shows her utter devotion to her husband and her genuine commitment to the marriage. Thank you for a beautiful story.

Excellent story. I've found I prefer the multi part stories over the one or two chapter stories.

You kept me interested... loved it 6/5 stars

I like how you kept Anne with the virtues she had before her accident. It's a story that tells a great story.

A fitting ending for an excellent story. There’s one point in the epilogue that you could have researched better: Greenwich CT is not on the ocean. That water is the Long Island Sound.

Love your writing style, great story line.

5 stars for the story, and a spot on my favourite authors list, editor or not 😉👍

Regards

Stiixx