by ronde
The second dance was a second chance, for both of them. And thank you for making their children more than simple placeholders in their parents' love story. Another great story, so glad you're back.
Great story, wonderful narrated. And indeed some stuff for a full novel. Congratulations from writer to writer.
OH SHIT!!!!!, I just noticed the author. That explains the quality and depth of character. Very nice piece of work, I enjoyed the sentiment of both central characters.
Lovely. You hit all the buttons just right - even down the the cards at the end. I particularly liked the roles of their kids - they are smarter and more perceptive than parents realise.
Well done and thank you
Another lovely story with excellent emotion and some nice ties to the past. Thanks for a sweet read.
Just a nice story about nice people who allow themselves to do nice things with each other. No trauma to liven up the end - just a good fit between nice people (or did I say that before). 5* because it made me feel good...and lonely.
Awww… I was hoping there was a small epilogue about their kids tying the knot to each other too.
I really enjoyed it. It struck some chords. Thanks for a great wholesome story.