by woodmanone
Thank You for another great wester tail. I have been waiting for the next adventure, and thanks to you I now have it. I can't wait for the next installment!
I have read each of your other western stories and really enjoyed them. This one is starting out great. Keep writing.
Yet another well-imagined and well-written story by Woody. Dont you know
that all the themes that populated Westerns have migrated to the hard
science fiction stories?
I feel the influence of Edgar Rice Burroughs here. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Love the concept and your style, count me as a fan.
Boys - he's at it again. With a slow, seductive comeon in the first chapter, followes by an unbelievably riveting 2nd chapter, cannot wait to see where WMO take his audience. Great start, keep 'em comin'.
I'm not much of a western reader but this story has its hooks in me! Keep up the great work!!!
Once again an interesting story, I can hardly wait to see how you continue this one. All the others have been good, and this one sure has the potential.
Looks like another excellent tale. I have enjoyed several of your other stories. Keep up the good work.
interesting twist you've provided here... i can't wait to see where you go next :))
Interesting idea! Will we find out how Jim survived in his cave for all these decades, and whithout going completely mad? Stay tuned for the next episode!
Interesting story with a lot of background information making the characters believable.
A good chapter, well written and smooth flowing.
I'll be watching for the next chapter, thanks.
I am enjoying the writing and the extensive background, but I do question how we are two chapters into a story on an erotic fiction site without mention of anything of that sort. I would think at least a disclaimer at the beginning was appropriate.
that I'm restricted to a 5. I thought I'd better read the beginning before the recently posted sequel and I am very glad I found this! I'm looking forward to reading more.
Combined with Zane Grey. I enjoy them both and woodmanone is joining them, don't know how I missed this story the last time I was reading his work.
Small issue. The Lakota Sioux are in the Dakotas. Prescott AZ is 1000 miles 190 deg SSW from there.