by Scott_M
I love the story, and the character development is great, but there are a lot of typos, omitted words, wrong prepositions - minor stuff, but the detract from the reading. If you have a proofreader clean things up, this story goes from 4 stars to 5 in an instant.
The questions are answered in Chapter 2 of this story. I haven't decided if there will be a Chapter 3...
Where is the wife in all this, did I miss something? I guess
But where was his wife, while he was deflowering his wife's sister?
I think that the story should continue. How he is going to convince his wife that he wants both her and her sister as his wives?
Thanks for the good read.