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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Not this again

This is bound to be another unfinished story like all the others, by this same author. I you cant finish your story in a reasonable time frame, please don't start.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Too Much Thought, Too Little Action

This story doesn't seem to be going anywhere.

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