All Comments on 'The Second Machine Ch. 02'

Unlike commenters on Part 01, I like a bit of mind games. Trouble is, the disconnect between actions and awareness can lead to internal contradictions, which can blow the story apart. What if Edie gets pregnant from all that cum ?

I'd rather see the story move into a state which is consistent. For example, Edie's clit and vagina double in sensitivity. She can carry this all the time, and will get used to herself. That would make her human again, not the half-asleep zombie she is in the story. Our largest sex organ is the brain, and this story appeal to that part.