All Comments on 'The Secret Life of My Loving Wife'

This was the hottest, and kinky too. I love kinky! Easily one of the best written and well organized stories I’ve read in a long long time. Should be a hall of famer.

This is the first I’ve read of yours, I will read more.

That was one of the hottest stories I’ve read in ten years. I look forward to a follow up.

So who was stealing from the business?

Best story I've read here in over a decade!

I thought I'd allready read the best story in here, but wow!!!

A job well done in any ways!!

Angela was selfish, a cheater, and a coward. She was also a shameless liar. Yeah, she did it for her husband. She's paying God knows what for prostitutes, and God knows how much over 3 years, and she didn't tell her husband, to protect him. Right.

Angela wants her cake, but she wants to eat it too. Gees, how rare is that in a cheating spouse? Love is about not betraying your spouse, not protecting them from the knowledge of your betrayal. And when is cuck hubby going to give her the threesome she wants with two men? She never said she wanted her husband to be one of the men.

Nice try, but an honest author would include the sequel where Angela finally embraces her promiscuity and repressed Lesbianism, and Tom and Cassie finally admit their love and respect for each other. They never disrespected or betrayed each other like Angela did, and in the end they will realize that their relationship has always been open, honest, with each having the other's best interest as the first priority. Angela's first priority was Angela, obviously.

A good plot well written, as far as it went. Too bad you didn't include its logical conclusion.

And wish the realities of life matched our imaginations and if that were so I would not be lying in bed next to a wife who is sleeping blissfully through my imaginary life

Absolutely deserves to be at the top of the Hall of Fame here. What a tremendulous story. Amazing detail and hot sex.

Well done loved the story hall of fame for sure perfect 10 stars

That was great would like to read their further adventures

Such an amazingly structured tale, so well developed and the word play just brings the images of sex to life. I think we all deserve a lot more of Tom and Angela.

This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read.

Totally erotic and every man's dream.

Superb fantasy.

Thank you

This is one of the best stories I've read on this site. It held my interest throughout. I was quite pleased with the husband's decision to mete out to the wife what she had done with others. So sad that they wasted all those years with almost the same fantasies. She went underground with hers and got to enjoy them. When he found out what she was doing, he brought it to the surface and they both got to enjoy them. A fantastic story

Not enough stars for rating this. Needs at least 7 stars, maybe 11.

Thoroughly amusing - and of course, erotic in the extreme!! 5*s.

I love your stories and your characters...and your imagination.

Please, PLEASE grace us with more of your great writing!!!!

Hands down the best story I have ever read

I've read all the comments, and while I appreciate the thoughtful comments that is is really a male-centrist version of female bisexuality... voyeuristic , but ultimately about the women being submissive to a man.. I would submit that there are plenty of other stories on this site where the opposite is true... not all stories need to be the same...

It was just a hot story... great porn... I look forward to reading all kinds of other porn here as well...

I know I read the other version some time ago, I liked it, but the ending in this version is much much better. Thanks for the original story, many more thanks for this improved version!

I can relate to the idea of a husband, and/or wife not wanting to tell their spouse about their deepest fantasy for fear of their reaction. I guess marriage can put a little damper in some things if you're not careful. Wanting to keep the one you love thinking the best of you is important.

I actually read this second try a while ago, not sure exactly when, and read it again tonight. It's really really good. I'll probably read it yet again at some point in the future.

Such a fun read. I really enjoyed this story from start to finish. Great ending.

Did they catch the thief?

How awkward was it for Tom and Cassie to continue their work relationship after they started watching the movies and masturbating together?

How does Tom feel about Angela's fantasy of a M-F-M threesome?

I would also like to see the jewelry design carry over to the sex ... perhaps custom designed nipple piercings.

Overall a very good story, but could have been improved by addressing these questions. Oh, and the revised ending is much better than the original.

Great fun sexy story. Pretty perfect

Easily the best story I have read on Literotica in a long time. Thank you, and would love a sequel.

Hmm, I have to say, that's a splendid suggestion. That would be a fun prequel to write. That's going on my list. Thanks!

Would REALLY like to read Angela's story leading into her "dalliances." How did she come to take the step? How did she go about it? How they made her feel and her reaction to the unmasking of her secrets. That would be really hot. How 'bout it?...

PS: the story was tremendous!

Not the best; that is a phrase I hear too often on here.

It seems a smidge unrealistic. I would like it to be real but I feel it's made to fit a somewhat too easily.

Only reason I have that thought is a lot of the story does seem very real in case you are feeling insulted.

Thank you.

You have so much heart and soul in your stories....my new all time favorite author here at Literotica!!!!

Please bring us more of your precious imagination!!!

Thanks all for the good feedback. I really appreciate hearing from people.

As to the questions about the wife's motivations, I would offer my interpretation along different lines than those proposed. I think that she views all of her sexual dalliances as just fun, which is why she allows herself to do it. She doesn't view any of her activities as a threat to her marriage because she loves her husband and is loyal to him. She's just doing it for sexual gratification and exploration.

She freely engages in the same-sex play because she can do it without feeling disloyal. Her husband isn't part of those fantasies and there's no guilt that he's not involved. She can't fulfill her fantasies with other men, though, unless one of the men is her husband, because that WOULD be disloyal. However, including him would mean telling him about her sexual curiosities and kinks, and she can't bring herself to do that. As a polished and professional woman, she feels like she has an image to maintain, and that image is the traditional "good girl" image that many women are saddled with.

I don't think her same-sex games are "lesser" at all; they're merely the ones that she can pursue given the conflict between her sexual desires, her "good girl" public persona, and her loyalty to her husband.

(Well, that and I really like writing the girl-girl stuff. So there's that.)

I do wonder how many couples in real life hold themselves back because they're afraid to reveal their kinks to their partners. I bet it's a large proportion.

So, sex between a man and a woman is serious and meaningful and important. But sex between two women is just, playing, shallow, fucking around. And entertainment, for men.

His spouse paid for sex with prostitutes for 3 years, three years, giving herself and them sexual excitement and thrills which she denied her husband, because she considered the sexual acts she desired were shameful and denigrating. She lied, she cheated, she pissed away their money for her sexual enjoyment. And the husband thinks that is OK, because it was just homosex, not sex that really means anything. Is that not bashing homosexuality?

The wife wanted sex with another man, actually two other men. She appears to have pursued all her other sexual fantasies with enthusiasm and abandon, so what makes him think she hasn't fucked other men? When will it occur to him that he has absolutely no reason to believe she has not been fucking other men and women for their entire marriage?

Her behavior and statements indicate she would have continued fucking other people behind his back. When does he realize he only knows what he saw on the hidden camera, and that all other fucking around will continue to be withheld from him?

I appreciate the effort to be exciting and erotic, but sooner or later he will realize that he is married to a lying cheating unethical person, who will deceive him to preserve her image and her marriage. She is sorry she got caught, and will demonstrate whatever it takes to assuage his doubts and fears. They will spend the rest of their marriage in uncertainty and mistrust, and fear of the unknown, and the future.

A very well told story of a marriage riding a shallow short-term fetish over the cliff to eventual failure. I hope you have the balls to write the rest of the story.

8 pages of slow, great build-up. Well done! Would love another story with similar themes.

...what about the thief!?! Seriously though, this was awesome. I have to say, I would've left the room and let them lock the door behind me in the Kara situation, because C&B torture is really not my thing, but the rest was smoking hot.

I still want to know who the thief was though.

I never thought I would see it, but it's true! You used the word 'cohort' correctly!!

This was an amazing story and I agree the ending in this one is more satisfying than the one in the previous version. But I digress: let me repeat that there is nothing sexier than the correct use of relatively obscure words. Kudos! Felicitations! Heartfelt gratitude!

Nice, slow build, lots of understandable paranoia and the terrific guilt of being so turned on while watching your sinful spouse getting her lusty rocks off. I was taken in the whole ten yards. Excellent work.

Long read but definitely worth it. It went through almost every emotion.

this story puts a spotlight on how we sometimes fail to see our partners cause we created a picture of them (and of ourselves in relation to them) which makes us absolutely blind for the real person we share our life with.

I believe this is the very heart of this story. It has been constructed along the idea of a couple who both want the very same and fail to get it assuming the other would never accept them when they show their true desires, their true self.

Insofar it is a parabel, Rabelais, a text to teach.

And it is hot for it tells us about a man who sees his world shuttered to pieces and searches/finds someone to confess, a wit mind to help him think, a sexy woman who partners with him in this moments of indecision. She has her own agenda (which finally fits in the picture seamlessly) but like the protagonist she does not push her interests but lets it all play out. Slow, patient, conscious, and then passionate.

Masturbating in front of each other, telling secrets before they ever touch the other one, that's SEXY.

A good read and great sex. 5 stars from me.

Nice story, excellent build up and well written. Thanks for the read.

Very well written, intelligent and hot. Nice!

Thank you so much for Thema best story I read so far

Thanks for the comments, everyone.

I actually had a couple of plot ideas for the jewel thief, one where Cassie and Tom caught the thief and cut a deal to release her if she went and had a session with Angela pretending to be an escort (and asking some investigatory questions in the process). The other idea was where Angela was actually the jewel thief to fund her hobby. I rejected the second one because I didn't want Angela to be evil in any way, and I rejected the first mostly because it seemed a little infeasible to pull off in a believable manner (though I was intrigued by it), and I didn't want Tom and Cassie to become blackmailers.

I suspect that they caught the jewel thief, though, and she was a beautiful redhead who was sent to prison where she had to embrace lesbianism to survive.

Liked all your characters. Very well written.

Thoroughly enjoyed this read.

That is a beautifully written & seriously hot story!

Like the story a lot. Hot, hot, hot xoxoxo Annette

As an aspiring writer, I love to read a well-written story. Not only did I enjoy it but will use it as a learning tool. The personal insights revealed made the story an interesting read. A little long for my personal taste but that is in no way a criticism. I will be sure to put you on my list of authors.

Incredible story. And until I read the other comments, I did not even think of the jewel thief. (Another Star for that alone!) Please write more.

what an amazing story. Wow!!!

Disappointed not to learn who was the jewel thief, other wise great story.

I think I'll be giving my husband that threesome now!

Indeed it is -- and so is this wonderful hot and sexy story! Marvellous stuff -- thanks for sharing your talents with us, and please have five big shiny stars from me!

Enjoyed the hell out of that

After reading this story I went back to look at the ending of the first version. I think you did a great job rewriting the inevitable confrontation and turned it into a pleasurable moment. Great writing.