All Comments on 'The Secretary'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
AS EROTIC AS NAIL FUNGUS

With this and a hot story, I could probably get aroused. Is sexual pleasure such an alien concept to you that you simply cannot relate to it or relate it to us?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
no babies

well that killed this story 1 star. adding others made it a no vote asshole.

rem556rem556about 6 years ago
Reality of life

I'm sure this story did not have the ending that most would like to have seen, but that is a reality of life. The story is pretty well told about the life of a woman who happened to be a secretary, her life choices, and experiences, which incest was a big part. When evaluating this story, let's not lose focus on the big picture! Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Boob Tube

A "boob tube" is a television set! I assume you meant a "tube top". Just sayin!

timbrewulftimbrewulfover 2 years ago

A goodstory. Please Please learn about punctuation. It will enhance the readability of an otherwise good tale. thanks for writing all your stories.

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