by bound2burst
Another piss poor chapter. I would say author has shit for brains but it may be piss for brains.
You are great a building tension and if this isn't everybody's cup of tea (or several), I for one like your story, the characters and where this is going.
A little bit of well-written kink never hurt anybody and while a few negative comments are to be expected in a somewhat less than mainstream category here; please don't hold it in and let your imagination (and everything else for that matter) run freely.
I for one will be waiting for the next chapters with great anticipation.
This is another excellent story and I look forward to more of the same. Well done!