All Comments on 'The Seduction'

I enjoyed your story.

Vampires! Didn't see that coming until the biting of the lip! Nicely told. This was a good read! I did have a little, well quite a bite [bad pun intended] of trouble with the frequent head swirling mix of the various activities so back and forth and so quickly once the blood got pumping [damn another bad pun].

Perhaps, in my own way of thinking, I would have preferred a focus on one characters actions at a time rather than rotating through their sex acts in such a fast action sequencing. It was sort of a merry-go-round scene effect.

Good work over all - 4 for sure IMHO.