All Comments on 'The Seduction of Amelia Ch. 01'

Weak, pretty much says it all.

Your story is well written. You are very good in bringing in the sex very slow. It makes it more exciting I feel. Looking forward to part 2.

This thing fluctuates between first person (Hennie is the narrator and uses the pronoun I) and third person (an unknown observer is the narrator and uses the proper name Hennie).

i liked it.. second chapter im sure will be better! smiles

looing forward to it

I like the age difference, but since Amelia is so naive, it would be nice to see Hennie take advantage of her a little more for his pleasure. Instead of giving her an orgasm first, he should have taught her to give him a blow job first. After he was sated, he could decide if he had the energy to teach her more. Also, I think it's important to learn to appreciate a mans balls. He should have taught her to bathe them properly with her tongue and mouth, even if they're very hairy. Thanks for a good start though.

remembrance of my very first full sex, first he kissed and sucked my cunt and then he fucked me, then i promised to do ANYTHING he wanted - ANYTHING ? he asked

yes, i shouted ANYTHING - and he taught me EVERYTHING -- I will tell you alll about it soon