by Jaymie_dee
In addition to the blowtorch heat that pervades this series, I really like the way you address the concerns of both the younger and the older lover. That fear of coming on too strong for her; his earlier fears about revealing himself. And you convey his utter amazement at how fabulous full-on penetrative sex feels in a beautifully authentic way.
..if the comments become fewer and fewer as I think everyone is in a hurry to get to the next chapter...just sayin..
I’m really enjoying the awakening of the “New Louise” sexuality. I can’t wait to see how far Jayme will lead her sexually or Louise will take him.
*Myhotslutwife*
Loving the new and improved Louise. Wondering if/when there's going to be any oral?
This may be the hottest so far. Louise's increasing passion is infecting. And his love for her so touching. I wasn't really sure his love of her breasts could be beaten but with painstaking grace you have taken us there. Thank you.
esl