All Comments on 'The Seduction of My Wife'

I hope she leaves you for him or you come home one day and she's fucking somebody you don't even know. Maybe she will divorce you for him. You stupid bastard! You don't deserve her. What if she gets pregnamt from him? I will never read anything else you write.

More like date rape. Your protagonist is an idiot.

I CAME TWICE..GREAT STORY!

Ok,there's things that could be better,but I enjoyed the story,the "reluctant" wife finally giving in and enjoying another man strikes a perfect chord with me,I can appreciate the emotions that went through his mind....................I guess you can tell I'd love my wife to do this

I really enjoyed it come with more

I guess that I am the only female that reads your stories,but it is the only way that I can come close to doing the real thing.

I really want to have intercourse with a black lover , but I guess it will never happen.

Your story was a great read. Wish I could watch some guy fuck my wife like that. Some of us would love to share our wives with other men. If you ain't into that you would never understand.

What sort of imagination puts a husband, hiding behind a potted palm tree, on the upstairs walkway, watching his wife take another mans cock and sperm???? lol

I am always turned on by the stories of the reluctant wife who eventually is enjoying being fucked by hubby's friend- and he is watching. If the friend was really doing something the wife didn't want, the husband would have been right there. So I would not consider him a wimp. He wanted his wife to have the most pleasure possible.

after eight drinks in short succession i doubt anybody fucks anybody -

The story was extremely erotic and worked Jessie the wife was voracious and a great sport to an evening of fun. The husband was a jerk that put poor Jessie off to fend for herself with Jason. Jason was married and a friend. Jason could've been a stand-up Guy and exited when Jessie's husband retired. Jessie's husband was faking in full view in the author's presentation, which only could leave the reader with the opinion that he wanted to be cuckolded by his wife Jessie. The author alligned the planets and Viola a cuckold story. A good one at that. The author is quite skilled in flowing through the erotica like a baby duck floating down a lazy creek quite impressive. Some readers may find cuckolding quite revolting as a lifestyle but that is an afterthought. Jessie's husband's actions after dinner is the elephant in the room thatis hard to digest.

Just another wimp husband. I hate cheating wives, but I find wimp coward husbands to be lower then life. He should kill himself. And she will be fucking anyone she wants now with no love or sex for her loser husband. Pathetic story

i'm not into reluctance - he needs his ass kicked - your jason should have done it

It is very hard to get on a high horse about Sweetie's succumbing to his friend's attentions when he has insisted on her looking provocative, THEN left them alone as he 'goes upstairs to bed!' After agreeing to her dare/jest that she flirt with the guest!

Last difficulty is 'How the fuck does Hubby know they dances the horizontal tango?' Hubby is upstairs, sleeping...remember? Sorry, Hubby, but you're as stuck as Sweetie was (and also three times!). Besides, you don't have much energy left to be irate...you shot all your emotion into the potted palm! Hope it thrives!!!

And do that till she only fucks black cocks and then gets impregnated by one of them,then watch the world of turmoil start to spin out of control,thats if you want to see a major meltdown,try that one on for size

and then let the cuckcold pay for his wishing of his wife to fuck other men,if your gona play,your gona pay, like they say. Let her become a cum dump for stranger's and have her have a litter of bastards all having different father's and not knowing which father is to which child, a regular fuck fest of biblical proportions,the wife becoming a breeder for other men to pump their potent seed into her fertile womb. Have her spitting out kids every 9 months on a regular routine that wont quit till either her cunt falls out or she dries up from age and can no longer breed,then have the kids take over and fuck each other, with multiple knockups to beat the band,not knowing who's a half brother fucking a sister or sibbling or screwing everyone of them till they're dropping kids out of their vagina's at an alarming rate,fill up that house faster than a boat with the bottom knocked out of it. I say fuck the fucker's till fucking fucker's have fucked the fuck out of their fucking fuck parts

Now that the "dam" has broken, so to speak, it will be most exciting to read about further adventures with Jason. Best yet, when the husband watches in their presence and then joins in. Perhaps Jessie will soon enjoy her first gang-bang.

I quite enjoy the pleasure my wife has with other men. In fact, I am the one who arranges the meetings with other men and other couples. So many stories I could write, but they would be too short for Literotica

The reality of what he said, what he ok'd and what she presnted and finished...a sad, hard, kick in the groin reality shock.

Time to leave, hire foxy excorts, get away and know you'll always remember but NOT Ever have to accept or relive!

I would kick her ass out and no way would i get off watching another man fuck my woman. She let it happen fully she is a slut.

I agree with the Anonymous whose suggestion was to terminate the marriage, but I disagree on the how. No way would I leave a note and quietly walk away with my tail between my legs.

I have total disdain for any husband who is stupid enough to play with fire - encouraging a wife to tease, leaving her alone with another man, acting as a freaking voyeur getting off on his wife's cheating. I have a similar disdain for a wife who'd actually go along with an idiot husband's suggestion to flirt. Neither displayed any maturity or commonsense while in the bedroom before the guest arrived. What happened after that was beyond the pale and all three were guilty.

I would NEVER have suggested flirting or going braless, and sure as hell would never have left them alone while pretending to go off to bed. That's a form of entrapment with the stakes being one's marriage... it didn't appear as if he had any prior reason to be suspicious about his wife.

That said, had there been some other reason for the two to be alone and I saw anything happening while out of the room, as soon as it was clear the wife was not to be trusted and was a slut in the making (i.e., intimate touches, allowing her blouse to be unbuttoned, copping a feel, and worse, rape without screaming her head off) I'd have packed HER a bag and pulled out my shotgun. However, I would not interrupt because at that point I WOULD have suspicions and would need to know just how little value my wife put on our marriage and fidelity and what sort of "friend" the guest really is.

If she continued to flirt/encourage the guest OR if the bastard "friend" forced himself on her (even grabbing tit) I'd have calmly walked down the steps, tossed the bag to her, pointed the gun at him and said, "Get the fuck out, you aren't the woman I married and you sure as hell aren't my friend. My trust in both of you is ruined, talk to my attorney. Open your mouths and at least one of you dies." If it had gotten to the point of nakedness and sexual activity before I could interrupt, the "friend" quite possibly would be lying in a pool of blood. Alcohol is no excuse.

Granted, in the story as written by Dolphin, the husband's just as culpable. I don't want to read a future chapter where they a) open their marriage or b) he becomes a "happy" cuckold, and they live happily ever after... because that's hogwash.

I guess I've reached my limit of cuckold and cheating wife stories. I know both deviancies exist, and that some people are warped enough to get off on it. I just can't stomach the thought that some wives and friends can't control sexual urges. I want a woman I can trust and a friend I can trust. Sadly, I've never found either.

Wish this story had gone in a different direction: Wife and friend have a pleasant chat, wife sends guy home with a hard on, wife goes upstairs and tells husband in no uncertain terms, "Don't EVER suggest I flirt again." Then, have him apologize, let them make love and close with the husband feeling really really stupid and really really thankful.

I'm just taking this story for what it is. A hot tale of a guy enjoying watching another man screw his wife. Deep down a lot of guys have this same fantasy. I'd love for another man to fuck my wife.

sloppy seconds with her pussy stretched out and lubed with cum ... that's a very special feeling

He watched her play at it, tease, suggestive, accomodating and then with seemingly false reluctance let him enter her - then she fucked the hell out of him! Then - she said what about...who?

Next, she recovers, crawls over to him, sits on his lap, impales herself on him and then with french kissing, she screws the hell out of him - some faithful and reluctant honest wife?

Okay - hard to do. While they are making out, he packs few suitcases with work and casual clothes, toiletries, quietly place them in his car, goes to kitchen, writes a note and leaves it on the table with his ring, the house key and his cell phone.

Note basically reads:

We vowed our chastity, love and fidelity to only ourselves. In front of everyone we swore our trust, integrity and to love only each other. You know, you always have known what I think about infidelity, adultery and even just light petting with friends. I am not a prude, am not a wimp/wuss, cuckold or submissive. I cannot and will not understand, accept an apology or forgive what I saw here tonight...EVER!!!

I have always loved you and only you, you have always been my reason for living, my love and my most wonderful partner so know that my leaving is very hard, difficult doesn't even cover the beginning of my emotions.

Don't EVER try to call or reach me in any way, I'll have my attorney contact you and I'll be fair. The only thing that makes my leaving you without too much difficulty is that I discovered that I don't know you, don't want to know you and I'll miss the woman I once married - YOU, are not her!

It would have been even more erotic if, while she was sitting on his hard cock, her husband came downstairs and put his hardness into her mouth and the three of them got on together. Perhaps in a later follow-up.

I would have liked the story to end differently where the friend and the wife did not make love it would have make the story more erotic to me just the seduction and the teasing

Great pace kept up through the whole thing, I wonder how many of us have friends like him and never get to see such an exciting thing to get off on as well??

I love the idea of the chase but not sure about doing it with MY friends, but I do think about one of them like this as I'm sure as eggs are eggs she is a dirty girl.................but I keep it in my head.

to prim and proper wives? She gave in way too easily to not be a slut. Just an opinion. I'm not sure how else she could have gave in without blowing the thing off, but hey, maybe that would be a better story and fit under the category of nonconsent. This story seems more like "Consent, but reluctance". Other than not fitting the category and a slutwife, great story and very erotic. Also liked how the pace wasn't too dull or long.

to set up the seduction and completion, and jason gets the obvious and husband gets an unfaithful wife from that point forward. where is the payoff for him?

Dolphin, I enjoyed your story and want to encourage you to continue. Ignore the comments that so many post here bashing stories. Your story is great to myself and I am sure many others who enjoy this type of story.

I stopped posting to this site after the same type comments below and post to several other sites where most the posters are very positive. I don't understand why someone would read a whole story they don't like and then tell you why they hated it and try to make it personal. If I start a story that I don't like, I moce on and figure it's not my forte, but why knock somebody else who has different tastes or likes than I do, like I have the handle on "normal."

Great story, I love it and hope to read more from you. Thanks for the contribution.

Obviously not everyone will like everything. I agree that people who do not like the cuckhold husband part should stop reading these stories.

Personally I liked it and hope you continue it with perhaps a little more "nonconsent." Keep up the good work.

Go on Dolphin.

Don't get discouraged.

You're doing a great job.

I hadn't noticed the category before I read the story, so that part is irrelevant to me.

I liked the story. My only qualm is the overuse of !

A full-stop, or period depending on what part of the world you are from, would have done a better job.

Apart from that minor detail, I would have never guessed English to be your second language; you have grasped the concept better than most English speaking people, so be proud!!!!

100% for an imaginative and erotic story.

If you read my previous comment, you will have noticed that it was written in 90 min and was never intended to be a masterpiece. If masterpieces are what you are after, may I suggest you read Shakespeare. It was intended as light reading only.

As for the spelling mistakes, I'm sorry if there were any, but English is not my first language. However, I checked your comment and it has more grammatical and spelling mistakes than my whole story! E.g. "but you're writing didn't capture.." And you never knew that Jess is a short form of Jessie?

And as for the catagory, I think you've missed the word Reluctance. It appears that you'd have been a lot happier if the guy actually raped her. Sorry to disappoint you, but rape is something that I feel so strongly about that I cannot even bring myself to write a story about it.

Have a nice day..

To the author: You criticized some people for the comments on the category but I have to say this... this is NonConsent and I didn't see any. Perhaps you didn't write it clearly but the impression I got was that the wife was enjoying her teasing immensely and was enjoying the reaction she was getting. That was disappointing, I would have liked to see Jason overpower her completely and take her hard. Then you could have her enjoying the sex and giving in.

As for your writing, I'm sorry but it was very poorly done. You changed tense and even changed the wife's name on occasion (from Jessie to Jess then back again). I could have overlooked the numerous spelling mistakes but you're writing didn't capture me at all so I was just left feeling that I wasted my time.

Next time, get someone to proofread your work.

... and got heaps of it! This story was, in fact, a mere experiment. It was written in about 90 minutes and the initial idea was to leave hubby in the bedroom and let the doc and wifey frolic in the lounge with hubby being none the wiser. Then a friend suggested I bring him out of the bedroom to spice things up. I warned him that many readers won't like this. See, in some peoples' book it's perfectly OK and even great for wifey to have a bit on the side, but, God forbid - hubby must not know about it!!! Or even worse, condone it. That, for some reason, takes all the fun out of it. What strange and hypocritical beasts we can be...

Another interesting phenomenon that I picked up is that some readers read stories under sections that they do not approve of and then believe it is their self-righteous moral duty to crucify the author! If you don't like incest, for instance, then stay the hell out of the incest section! Their critisism is based 100% on the theme of the story and writing skills are not even looked at. I sometimes cannot help but wonder if their spouses know what they're up to...

Of course the husband in the story is a wimp! I would not even dream of sharing my beautiful wife with another, so in principal I myself do not like stories like these. But, boy, the reaction one gets really makes it worth the effort.

Oh, and thanks to all those for their really positive comments and e-mails! It is much appreciated! Even though I do not believe that the story deserves a rating that high...

Till next time! It was fun!

The_Dolphin

I agree with the "cuckold husband" bit: not a story I'd read. There was no build up to the friend having a large cock or even that SHE noticed it was a big(ger) cock than her husband's. Still, I think the reluctant wife part is a turn-on and more time should've been spent in the story with HER emotions, and even the husband's... he just wanted her to flirt, but only so far... and she didn't even want to flirt. So, the build up of the desire/emotion to HER wanting FEELING "caught up"/horney ... and the HUSBAND getting turned on by how she's being promiscuous IN FRONT OF HIM with his friend... just some suggestions...

the prior comments pretty much summed it up. I just wanted to add that the writing sucked worse than the wife. Zero development, zero passion or lust or build up. Kinda like a quicky masturbation.

I cant believe you left out the most important part, the husband will support the wife, lover and all there children including college!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now seriously how many men in the United States would actually really live a life like that?

I am thinking maybe less then 50 and 49 of them are nuts.

Jackie

First, the "friend". He, of course, has a larger cock than the husband and he is not afraid to take liberties when they are handed to him on a silver platter. Now, the wife. She is asked to flirt but not to take it any further than that. She ignores that request and ends up riding the friend for all she is worth. What does that make her, class? That's right, the "slut-wife." And now for the husband. One minute he is threatening to punch the friend's lights out and then he is masterbating to the scene before him. And what does that make him, boys & girls? That's right. the "cuckolded wimp husband." Now, at the end of the story, he wonders what they will do next. Well, we will ignore a real-life solution and stick to the fantasy answer that happens on this site constantly.

The wife chooses the friend over the husband and starts humiliating the husband right away. The friend moves in and takes over the household. The wife stops having sex with the husband and begins plans to bear the friend's children. The husband is estatically happy over all this and they live happily ever after.

First I have to say I will never understand why the people that complain about these wife cheating/husband watching stories even read them. I hate the idea of parents having sex with children so you dont see me in the incest category.

Having said that the story is awful. You dont get any feeling that its plausible. Nothing he tells you about the wife in the begining would lead you to believe she would act this way this quickly. It basically reads like a porn movie seduction.

A wife fucking around whether with hubby or not for the first time is a huge deal and should be full of emotion.

Jackie

This is a fantasy site, so it is fair to say that most readers aren't looking for realism, but it does make the fantasy easier to enjoy if the story is plausible. This one isn't.

I'm no prude, and I love a hot fuck story, but this one doesn't cut it.

A decent effort, but I agree with GoodWifey, women aren't attracted to wimps. The husband setting up the encounter and then watching like the pathetic cuckold he is really brought the story down.

but as others have said, not believeable enough.

There could not possibly be as mant wimpy wankers as these stories make out.

Women want to be with men, not wimps.

Don't know why my name didn't show before...

but as others have said, not believeable enough.

There could not possibly be as mant wimpy wankers as these stories make out.

Women want to be with men, not wimps.

Nice story, well done!

Great story - don't worry about prudish losers who are classic contradictions - they visit porn sites and then crib about morals - talk about the pot calling the kettle black.

The boobs popping out was too obvious though - saw it coming;)

Not only does his wife fuck around on him but is coerced to do it by his best friend. THey should both rot in hell. But then he is a literotica husband who not only doesn't object but gets off on it. Most men would make sure that the big dicked "friend" wouldn't be poking new holes anytime soon and the wife, well you can imagine what would happen there.