by PlainJane12
Just a quick word to say - you're brilliant! I love this! I love the way you've drawn it out, it leaves the reader wanting more and more! Sorry for all the exclamation marks but I do love this!!!
I love your writing style and Dor's inner monolgue: "Did this ass just call me a whore?" This has got to be the best story I have ever read on this site...it's so good that I've got to recommend it to friends of mine and just get over my bashfulness about it being a literotica story. Also, Eric's little speech about why he loves Dor is probably one of the sweetest romantic confessions I've ever read. Your characters are so engaging and realistic in their flaws, inadequacies, motives and endearing traits. I am so glad I stumbled across your awesome work.