All Comments on 'The Seed'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I didn't get the ending about the seed but it was crazy good, especially your descriptiveness, awesome stuff

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice adaptation

Love how the grand daughter of Lovecraft is black. He was pretty racist but I can see him having a fling with a black woman. Very well written but I hoped to have seen more madness given it was Lovecraftian. One way you could have done that was by denying her orgasm.just have it build but no release until she went mad. I was thinking you were going to have him shove the staff into her pussy and her pussy would have been the gateway. I also did not like the exposition. It seemed out of character for the cultists

nargatoulanargatoulaover 4 years ago

Easily the best story I have read the last year.

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