All Comments on 'The Serpentine Bodyguard'

I've read a few X-COM stories with Vipers but this is the first one where the viper could talk to the MC without using something to help her communicate or just using body language. Really enjoyed it and great work!

Now you can do a sequel about having Hssara show how she protects him from protagonists and terrorists, like what you mentioned in the beginning of the story.

Pacing felt a little rushed, like there was a big hurry to get to the sex scene and then to the end. Nothing wrong with a quick story, but the setup of both the world and characters seemed to indicate there was a lot more depth to be explored. I like the characters a lot and do hope there will be more to their story.

First type I’ve read this genre but I hope you continue it.

Like maybe a year or so later they're about to become parents or something else.

nicely done I hope you do more hope it does not end in a to be continued.

It started out a whole lot like "Uninvited" by Snekguy stories - perhaps just a tiny bit too much so... but then it veered off on a slightly different path