by CloverGazer
The story is great so far and full of promise, but it feels a little rushed
The first part was a bit strange but I wanted to see how you followed it up and I was very happy with where you went. I can see this could be VERY interesting and I am going to settle in for the ride.
Enjoyed that.
Looking forward to reading more.
Many thanks for sharing with us...
Just cam across your latest story and decided to read your other stories. This one has sooo much potential. I really really hope you will add more chapters soon
Woow didn't ready abstory with that much Potential in a while
Please cintinue