All Comments on 'The Seventh Commandment'

well written n very well thought out.Like to see next chapter.

One can not serve 2...will hate the one and love the other. Joss having been taken by her 'dream' with black hair and dismissed going home with a pussy smeared perfumed face and an after-sex pussy. How is Jocelyn going to face her 5 year partner who likes things tidy? Will Jocelyn break the eleventh commandment, 'thou shalt not get caught?' I'm not into dom-sub story lines, but if this is such a story, it's not overtly so thus far. I am intrigued enough to keep reading. Agree with the 1st commenter, well written. You've written Joss...err...Jocelyn into a mess morally, mentally/emotionally and physically. I'm coming back to see how you write her through it. Thanks for sharing 🙃

Wow, Suzi, by far the best yet. I loved every word. Brilliantly built up and a wonderfully erotic finale. Well done!

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Anna

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I loved your long slow build up and the exploration of your characters. It really brought them to life. I also loved your use of colours.

Your descriptions are full and beautifully delivered.The interplay between the two characters is wonderfully delivered and described. The anticipated tension and interplay between her partner and her new infatuation adds an extra layer of anticipation.

I happily look forward to the following chapters.

I wonder how or if she will tell her partner about this and what will she say about being so late coming home after work, well I can't wait for the next part

Intriguing story. Have an idea where this may head but will have to wait. Not too long i hope.

It dragged on and then rushed sex. Bad combination.

Shit shit double shit shit …. Sorry for my outburst, but the partner and the white lie and the orgasm ….. I’m not sure how sapphic lovers handle such ball breaking actions, but uh hu ….. just one decision and a scenario is unfolding might not worth it …. I will use a line out of the eighties, from a female singer “ love is a battlefield ….” …… tits well

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