All Comments on 'The Sex Club and Jessica's Submission'

i cant vote because your second page did not format right. i did like what i was able to read but the second page ran into the literotica stuff on the right side of the screen. please fix it and resubmit it.

I hope the sub was taken to a hospital to begin treatment for STDs and whatever else she contracted.

Wonder just what she did to her sisters to be treated and permanently marked? I (as one of her sisters) would have been afraid fo retribution from her master.

Hope your story is reformatted soon.

would like to read more and yes, i had problems with the second page also, however i did make most of it out. i'm glad it ended up with her Master standing up for her finally...i had wondered if he was really that uncaring or not paying attention but then again...this is a story and not r/l...i know my Master would never allow his property to be used to such lengths without his prior complete knowledge and would have stepped in at some point. However, as a story i liked it...more please...make the bitch pay. respectfully a fan in Texas

I loved it.

Fucking ridiculous. A waste of time as this overwritten garbage is intended to seem "humiliating" to the fem, and "exciting" to who? Certainly not the reader. It only humiliates those who tried to suffer through the piss poor writing of a pseudo-intellectual.

Couldn't get past the first page - time is better spent shoveling shit than reading this crap

I haTe this kind of stuff. Why glorify it?