by MarkThyme
OK. I probably will check out what the wifey gets up to in the ch2, but don't count on me giving you any feedback.
So far not bad but the age thing i didnt like at all
Also the early husband comment of, i told her if she wanted to stray it was okay, yeah right. How many newly married men actually say that crap. You could have done without that statement
Jackie
Its a small point but you may want to look up the meaning of losing ones virginity
inconsistancies. She was 16 when she lost it, but she had also graduated from school and was in college. She was a vigin but one boy had almost cum in her but she stopped him. She was a virgin but 2 small boys had been there first now she wants a real man. So far I see that she has been devirginized 3 times, must be a record. Now after 20 years of marriage her husband is talking about her sex life and is worried that she is having an affair, but he has had one night stands while on the road. Sounds like the pot calling the kettle black.
This whole story is about nothing but everybody boffing everybody else. Tony does teenagers, his wife is getting it on at the pub. The husband gets his on the road, and she gets hers anywhere she wants to, although that part is pure supposition at this point in the story.
George
an odd start but i liked the story once it got going. realistic car sex - who hasn't been there? looking forward to chapter two
Look at the scores asshole. You must be one old fat ugly cocksucker since your dead ex wife left you and you found out she fucked the fleet
Why do these anonymous bitches get so upset when someone doesn't like their cheating whore stories?