All Comments on 'The Sex Star Ch. 01'

So hot, I love stuff like this! I think the writing jumps around a bit, and I'm already losing track of who is who and who is fucking who, but still super hot!

Would it help if I posted a dramatis personae (list of characters) or something similar? I've thought about doing that, since it might make it easier to keep track of the admittedly large cast. Just have to figure out which area of the site to post it to.

I can't wait to read more

Glad you like it so far. Chapter 13 is about half-finished now, will be posted end of this week or sometime next week.

Also, for those of you who have trouble keeping track of the characters, this story has a character sheet on tvtropes.org now. Should help out a little bit.

I don't know if you can edit this still or not as I have never posted here, but if you can you need section breaks when switching teams. Like the story so far though.