All Comments on 'The Sex Tutor Pt. 01'

plus the sex was way too fast for learning much, hell he didn't even go down on her, could have been so much better story if you had tried.

Nice story but the sex between the young girl and older guy happened much to soon. One thing is certain, holding out until he nailed her after another half hour of playing, even going part way, would have made it more realistic. More coming with training after this first chapter?

Despite other negative comments this story is perfect for getting down to business when you don't have much time to waste! Loved it :)

Although some of the mistakes were minor, at the end when you shifted magically from Michael to Kevin is something that is almost unforgivable. I won't be reading the next section. For her first time she seemed very nonplussed.

A good way to do this is print it out double line spaced (like a manuscript) and do a first edit using the blank lines for comments and changes. Then put it away for at least a day or so and read it again. And then repeat until you think it's as good as you can make it.

You lost readers because of your errors not because of your story.

Your mom wanting her virgin daughter to fuck her boyfriend ... Wow .. Erotic and hot